A SIMPLE THOUGHT IN A SIMPLEST FASHION.......
waiting for someone,to sing me her song.
so many hours,i passed alone;
thinking till the wee hours of the night.
so many dreams,i'v kept inside me;
alone in the dark. but now,u've come along.
and u light up talha's life;
you give me harbinger of hope,to carry on.
you light up my days; and fill up my nights with song.
rolling at the sea; adrift on the water.
wading through the shore, could it be finally;
i am sailing for home.
finally a chance; to say i love u.
Never again,to be all alone. and you light up my days;
and fill my nights with song. and u light up my life;
and give me hope to carry on.
u light up my days and fill my nights with song.
it can't be wrong; when it feels so right.
u feels so right; life feels so right because u light up my life;
with ur smile i long.........
7 comments:
Awesome dude!
Good going!
heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
HAUAHAUAHAUHAUAHAUAHAUAH
i loved all Eolian...
beautifulll blue rose and more ur poem!!!
everynight i sti near my window and wait my love cme to sing for me one beautifull song....
u can imagine it? here... farm... uiaaaaaaaaaaa take a guitar!!!
kissessssssssssssssssssssss
Debby
hey talha!
u reely got some poetic sense in u.above all ur poems r quite simple n sweet.keep it up...i'd suggest u to keep a compilation of all such poems if u hav more...
Awsomev really !!
if am not mistaken then u haved just expressed ur emotions and and the things which u've been carried all this way untill now. Really talha i never knew ki ur such a versatile geniues and a sensible poet too. for whoever this poem has been written about is a lucky girl indeed
WOW..it's simply mesmerising talha...getting lost in thoughts...got the imagination...beautiful is ur song..yes, it sounds so right..it can't be wrong :D
someone is really lucky..dunno who that cindrella is dreaming whom you are writing such beautiful poems...fantabulous :)
for whom is this written? Rani?
u did not answer buddy!
ok tell whose id is this anum_a9211@yahoo.com?
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